十里平湖霜满天
寸寸青丝愁华年
对月形单望相护
只羡鸳鸯不羡仙
源白衣卿相诗集·别思
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Wrote this poem last night.
NOT!
Loved this piece since like long ago.
But some say its too sentimental,
too girlish.
Who cares?
When I listened to it in the past,
its poetic quality resonanced some of my longings from somewhere in time.
Now when I revisit it,
it brings a smile to me,
thinking about my past.
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Hey, this version nice too
十里平湖绿满天,
玉簪暗暗惜华年。
若得雨盖能相护,
只羡鸳鸯不羡仙。More lively and happy then the other version.


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